What if I just didn't feel like correcting you? (No offence, but I could have found something to correct if I really wanted to) Actually, I think you're quite good. I think in an actual conversation you would do better than me. By the way, you used heave/heaving a couple of times instead of have/having. According to my electronic dictionary, heave has quite a few meanings, all different from what you meant: 1. Utter a sound, as with obvious effort 2. Throw with great effort 3. Rise and move, as in waves or billows 4. Lift or elevate 5. Nautical: to move or cause to move in a specified way, direction, or position 6. Breathe noisily, as when one is exhausted 7. Bend out of shape, as under pressure or from heat 8. Make an unsuccessful effort to vomit; strain to vomit 'velika noč' is Easter (you were close enough ) Cheers